zyada kuch nahi hota, bas yaad hi satati hai
kisi ke kho jaane par, aankh bhi bhar aati hai
waqt ka sahara ho to saare zakhm bhar jaate hain
dheere-dheere bichade apne, thode hi yaad aate hain
jeena mushkil ho jinke bina, vo bhulaye bhi ja sakte hain
ye to samay samay ka khel hai, tut-te to kai saare sapne hain
chalte chalte koi bichhade to kuch ashru baha hi diya karte hain
zindagi ka safar hi kuch aisa hai, log akar chale jaya karte hain
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Log aakar chale jaya karte hain lekin yaadein rah jaati hain.
Unhe bhulakar to jee loge, lekin dil se kya mita paoge?
Jee loge tum kahte ho, lekin kya sach me jee paoge?
do char pal hi bache hain unke saath, to kya ab unko bhi thukraoge?
Nice emotions. Good to see someone liking urdu poems on blog :).
I have some urdu (+ sanskrit) poems on my blog too.
Btw, You should definitely learn beh'r or Urdu meter if you want to make your poetry timeless. If you just want to blog, then this plain stuff is fine.
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B
Currently I write poems in Hindi/Urdu as a hobby. Don't get much time, but with every new composition I seem to be climbing up the stairs. Really want to improve the writing and make it reach "up there"... but let's see where my effortless attempts take me.
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