ishq jo maza deta hai, us maze ki tulna nahi ho sakti..
ishq jo saza deta hai, us saza ki kalpana nahi ho sakti
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thoughts of the conscious and the subconscious mind
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hmmmmm nice sher!Keep it up
As for equating love with saza I will quote this one from Qateel Shifai
Pyar tumhara bhool bhi jaoon lekin pyar tumhara hai
ye ek meetha zehar sahi ye zehar bhi aaj gawara hai
Thanks Manish! Whenever I tell someone or write somewhere that a particular thing is "nice" ... usually I don't think that it's even worth sending or reciting to people. Hmmm... don't know how you define the word "nice" in your dictionary :-?
ha ha ha ha :)ju
u have put me in the dock Geetali!
hmmmmm
Zindagi ki dictionary mein shayad hi kisi lafz ke hamesha ek se maine rehte hon :)
Let me put in this way ! I love to see people from younger generation like u taking interest in Hindi & Urdu poetry!
So take it as word of encouragement & continue honing ur skills in poetry!
Hum "young" chaahe ho janab, par hum kisi se kam nahi! Thanks for your comments and compliments. Will try to keep on improving.
after a long long time
glad to see ur good rhyme :)
Thanks Rahul!
Geetali ji,
Aapke is sher par mujhe ek sher yaad aa gayaa.
Ishk jab ek taraf ho to sazaa detaa hai
Ishk jab dono taraf ho to mazaa detaa hai.
Shubh kaamnaayen
subhan allah! ... very true!
tusi great ho ji...
ishq to ram ka naam hota hai.
ishq to shyam ka nam hota hai.
ishq mein karna na gaflat koi
ishq eshse badnam hota hai.
ishq to ram ka naam hota hai.
ishq to shyam ka nam hota hai.
ishq mein karna na gaflat koi
ishq eshse badnam hota hai.
If you say so Amit :)
Interesting one Jay Prakash Ji.
ishq ko badnaam premi nahi, duniya waale karte hain.
shayad vo doojo ki khushi aur khud ki bekaraari se darte hain.
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