jab bhi koi avsar aaye, krodh ka para badhta jaaye
pichli baaton ki chhaw mein, kadvi baatein bak di jaaye
kamzor, bewafa, aur badchalan jaise shabdo ki aadh mein
khudko bachakar, use hamesha ke liye neech sthapit kar diya jaaye
ghar ki baat pachi nahi, dhindhora peet dala
padosiyo aur rishtedaro ke saamne, use anaath karaar kar dala
logo ke dhakke aur pathharo ki thhokre le jaate kahan...
le gaye waha, jahan pahuch usne khud se naata tod dala
Sept 25, 2005 - 11:19 PM
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Beautifully written.
The tragic end the poem had, rightly supplemented the title of the poem - isn't it difficult to think of a title after you've composed the poem?
The first paragraph signified revengeful love and the second, it took the poem at a self destructive mood.. I still am unsure if I've comprehended it right..
nicely composed :)
Very well interpreted Prasoon. Yup, you are right, it is very hard to think of a title. I am proud of myself for coming up with the title for this.
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