questions are yet arising again
my friends, my acquiantances, repeat themselves...
"are you coming woman?!"
i hate to say this again n again
but the bare and honest truth repeats itself...
"my life is hell! my life is hell!"
i have everything in full
be it family, friends, or a night of no rest
the one thing i lack the most, is...
"a life to self! a life for self!"
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2 comments:
Are you coming woman?? What is the use of such a line:) My life is hell, you say, but poem doesn't bring out why?
Maybe your Hindi poems are so much better that I will chide you for this one too. But then, if you write so well at your age, sky is the limit!
you put your thought down to amazing word i should say - good good :)
n wait, ur try at english poems is earnest - get a lil more rhyme n style - rest like rhythm is perfect..
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