एकांत में बैठकर वक़्त गुज़ारने
सूनी राहों पर तन्हा बढ़ जाने
...का मन करता है
उम्मीदों से दामन छुड़ाने
जज़्बातों को पीठ दिखाने
...का मन करता है
पहचानना है अपने आप को
जानना है कौन हूँ मैं
जहाँ-ए-ख़ुदगार्ज़ी की डोरें तोड़
चलना है... बढ़ना है...
नामुमकिन हो अगर ज़ंजीरो से रिहाई
तब भी ख्वाब रहेंगे हरदम...
ख़ामोशी के साथ निकाह रचाने
सन्नाटे के साथ-साथ बतियाने
...का मन फिर होगा
सेहरा को गले लगाने
विश् की घूँत पी जाने
...का मन फिर होगा
-गिताली शर्मा
ekaant mein baithkar waqt guzaarne
sooni raahoN par tanhaa badh jaane
...ka mann karta hai
ummeedoN se daaman chhuDaane
jazbaatoN ko peeth dikhaane
...ka mann karta hai
pehchaan-na hai apne aap ko
jaan-na hai kaun hoon main
jahaan-e-khudgarzi ki DoreN toD
chalnaa hai... badhnaa hai...
naamumkin ho agar zanjeero se rihaayi
tab bhi khwaab rahenge hardam...
khaamoshi ke saath nikaah rachaane
sannaaTe ke saath saath batiyaane
...ka mann phir hoga
sehra ko gale lagaane
vish ki ghoonth pi jaane
...ka mann phir hoga
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12 comments:
like it. can relate to it :)
Bahut achaa likhne ka prayaas kia hai tumne par mujhe kahin aisa lagtaaa hai ki shayad tum jaldi me thi jab isse likh rahi thi....isslie thoughts bahut clear hokar ujaagar nahi ho paai..............keep writing and try to give some more time before finalizing..........
Hi,
i dunno much about you .. i was registering at 43places.. registering for meerut . came across you profile.. and came across this blogg.. you write amazing..
Cheers
@Amrit
...I thought the meaning in this one was not clear, but I guess if you can related to it, then I succeeded.
@Sachin
...kathinaayi ye hai ki mujhmein patience nahi. jab main kuch likhna shuru karti hoon, to mujhe vo ek hi baari mein khatam karna hota hai, because otherwise I never look at it again. I need to work on that though.
@Vish
...Thanks! I hope you keep dropping by :)
hi
was forwarded your link by a frnd....siddharth...in meerut....i love to read and write poetry....at ur age u write truly beautiful and deep stuff....shall be a regular visitor....
deepa
Madam i visit your blog every day with the hope that there will be a new poem posted here.. Please do take time and write a new one.. i know its not that easy and all... But a request from a fan.. hehe
सुन्दर कविता!!!
@Deepa and Pratik
...Thanks and Dhanyawaad!
Keep dropping by... aate rahiyega :)
@Vish
...I'll personally tell you when I write a new kavita ;)
आपकी कविता को पढ़ने का मन करता है,लेकिन कहीं-कहीं कुछ अज़ीब सी है। हिंदी में खामियाँ हैं। शायद hindi translator की ही दिक्कत रही होगी, अन्यथा आपने अपना नाम तो गीताली ही लिखा होता ना कि गिताली।
@Aditya K. T.
...Main apna naam isi prakaar likhti hoon - गिताली
That's how it sounds when one says it :)
Amazing.. Waiting for more
geetaliji!! u started it gud but end tak aate u faltered + seems like u just missed the meaning of some of the words...neways, nice effort......keep writin!! expectin a lot more from u.......
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